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"Please,don't do this!I beg of you,I'll give you anything you want just please stop!",the voice of a young woman rings from the laboratory walls.The woman was breathing hard in fear and her hands were shackled as a robotic arm with a syringe came closer causing her to shriek as loud as she could.The young woman was 21-year-old Raven Johnston who was thought to be missing for 24-hours only to be kidnapped by a mad scientist who needed a test subject for his latest serum.The scientist just cackled madly and pressed the button.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(going back from 24-hours)Raven was just walking down the street trying to get to the store to grab a carton of milk for a recipe.To everyone,Raven was a pillar of the community;she gave to charities,gave food to poor people and donated her old clothes to charity.Raven was given her name because of her black,flowing hair she would keep in a ponytail everyday.As she was getting to the store,Raven saw an old man looking more into his mid-30's or 40's looking at her with a huge smile on his face.The man was wearing a dull white coat,thick glasses and his hair was matted up like a bird's nest,but he wore that smile and approached Raven saying,"Hello,young lady!What's your name?"

"I'm Raven,Raven Johnston,nice to meet you."she said hesitantly.Raven smiled and reached out her hand to shake the guy's hand then afterwards,she felt a small pain in her hand.It turned out the man had a tranquilizer hidden inside of his sleeve and when Raven shook his hand,the needle went into her skin.Suddenly,Raven felt dizzy,her whole body felt numb then her sight began to blur and finally she fell to the ground.
:icondragonguardian253:
This is the first part of my story,sorry if it seems short but I'll write the other part tomorrow night,if I get around it.Please,like I've said before NO CRITIQUES!!!!!:flame::flame:
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*RoseAve Dec 17, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
So far so good.
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:icondragonguardian253:
Yeah,I also have two more parts out right now if you want to check them out.Thanks so much by the way.
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